@100ProofZeus uuummm...it's an okay song. nothing supa special. the 1st 2 verses were mediocre the 3rd was ok only bcuz it was sped up like the whole "twista" style. the beat was cool. it's a head bobber lol but umm the vocals on the chorus need a lil bit more work lyricism was okay but it was nothing new and interseting something we've never heard b4. it's not one of those songs where u wanna put it on repeat. Although something u did good was he repetition. The way the One Last Time was repeated makes the song easy to learn and it gets stuck in yo head therefore it makes the song catchy and possibly on its way to a hit. That's all Lady Gaga songs r anyway. lol! But it ok. Good job for u kno some1 just starting and not signed to like a label or something. Better than some...