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by morcupine
on 8/3/10
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http://bit.ly/awZ3Pm ...yays I've been published! Wouldn't seem right though if I didn't complain about mysterious changes they made. 1) Strangely adding unnecessary commas such as the first one in the first sentence. 2) They added that very sychophantic sentence about Spencer Kelly, which is bizarre, not least because he ISN'T prolific and a keyboard and stand are NOT revolutionary. 3) They removed my snide bit about Hallward Library posers, thus removing anything even implying it was written specifically for this magazine, and making the last sentence of the penultimate paragraph not quite work. 4) Publishing it more than a month after writing isn't really good enough for a topical piece. Rant over though, I'm pleased it made the issue. :)